a LP (large piece) made for a contest....

I made this for a contest, the theme was music....what do you all think, please be honest and COMMENT!!! lol

Posted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 1:15 am Post subject:

I like it a lot although I think the text / logo gets kinda lost where you have it placed. Might want to find a more "open" spot or otherwise make it stand out more from the background stuff.

Eagle
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Posted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 1:18 am Post subject:

I agree with Eagle. I like the colorful, shiny keys a lot!
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Posted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 6:22 am Post subject:

Yep text is hard to see. What is the black line that extends from the left to the keyboard. It looks blurry and out of place with all the color. I like the shapes and all behind the keyboard, very cool.
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Posted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 7:29 am Post subject:

the black line on the left is a hand extending to the keyboard....it is transparent with a drop shadow....thanks for the comments guys!!
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Posted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 9:39 am Post subject:

A new spot for the text will help, and as for the outline of the hand, maybe change it from a drop shadow to just an outline, so that it is smooth, like the rest of the sig. Also, the part saying "By Bry5012", it is kind of pixely, so try to fix that, maybe with a soft blur or something.
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